Window Poem by Sonya Florentino

Window

Rating: 5.0


Once I was visited
But that was long ago
Now I sit here waiting
By this tiny window

Once the heavens smiled
But that was long ago
Now I look from where I am
But only dark clouds roll

Once I felt sacred
Enveloped in gold
Now I feel naked
To the core

Once I felt blessed
Certain I've been touched
Now I'm not so sure
What it was

Once I felt holy
But not anymore
Not I'm a tortured
Restless soul

But since I've been visited
I can't close the door
In case I'm found
Worthy once more

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jack Williams 07 December 2009

I suspect anyone who has loved and lost can relate to this.

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 11 April 2009

But since I've been visited I can't close the door In case I'm found Worthy once more..................yes he is sure to visit you again...may he found some imperfection which needed to be work out.............good write.........10+++.......

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Michelle Melody 28 January 2009

I can relate with these words...

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Ency Bearis 04 January 2009

a nice instrospection..written and narrated well....great piece...10

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Sonya Florentino

Sonya Florentino

Manila, Philippines (residing NYC)
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