Wing Our Loves Over Their Hearts (Ft Ellias) Poem by Unwritten Soul

Wing Our Loves Over Their Hearts (Ft Ellias)

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'No love in stranger hearts'

Tired to hear those words
Repeating sound played in our ears
For us at first dont know each others
Forbidden us to smile even to a simple Hi
Living in the cage, they set our boundaries
Opposite sights, thought we born to continue their fights
Ignorance, the dead light blind our sight

Blinking eyes we only stare between this rule
Our hand like strong bird wings, but tied cant fly
Just stay inside we wait and cry
Maybe we just unimportant actors
Follow politic direct, caged in drama
Scripted by lust, Illusion by reigning power,
Acting in this anyway, really hurt, will it be over?

Maybe someday...one day..we shall waiting that day
The day we will fly together, touch the sky full of stars
We bound to their unfair rule, where hates not peace us
And our hands cant hold on, hates discriminate loves
Cant forever to see each other blood, will we move to safe side?
As grudge change red rose with the red blood
In this unending war, end of lovely earth,
Hatred of two sides, and we sacrificed in between
Maybe someday...one day..or dreaming in a day
Will be just a day, we only sleep on dead bed, end of our day
They kill those children smile, help them erase older people smile
Why someone has to be killed for cruel vision
As we know, life has given as everyone mission
But we all now in two cages, separated in jar of hatred

Tired of those words
The voices only echoes us more fears
We need to learn from old men but we lost them
We used to hear children laugh but cry they think as lullaby
We miss when the rain painting seven colors over the window
Never, never this raining blood, create the same magical rainbow

In this shadowed place, Living in different invisible cages
I stare and ponder, wonder if someday we can fly together

'Existence of love is nothing but to embrace life'

That's what i longing to hear
Oh God if there still an open sky
Or if only just to have one big cage
It just enough for us to build a palace
Let it be our place, living as one with peace and grace
For our hands hold theirs, cheering days, counting stars
Oh God if there's something like my dreaming sky
Will mend our broken smiles, for our life revived
For all hands hold loves to make world survives

Till the world end, only loves survive our life

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is a poem that i wrote with my contributor and friend, Ellias..I was honored when he said he had a vision about humankind, he sent me a poem, talking about war and the poem stressing about suffering of people with the boldness of children life and future issues. So we finally decided to hold our idea be one to voice, never supporting war and bless for every child, they were born for better life not to adapt in hating atmosphere. It took me a week to read and ate all the original poem, and digested before i released all in a new shape, my interpretation of the original poem (posted in his page 'Friends over the world') even though the stricture got a big reconstruction the idea was from Ellias, and some still in same shape...i just making it in my own idea while embracing his own, because i support peace not war as for children to live better...The title originally in Persian language (Simorgh parandeye solh- freedom, bird) but as much i can also intrigued by the fully Persian words, i decide to rename it so everyone can understand, a mirror to the poem...Thanks Ellias for believing me to deliver your idea, i have this chance to voice my support! ...Never love war but people and children all over the world_Unwritten Soul
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ellias Anderson Jr. 01 September 2012

, , , Very well, it's interesting that people just get silent in front of human breaking and killing, sometimes, in my ideas think that what is our altitude about the humanity? what is this word? we just think when a person raises his or her flag to protect the humans of not being killed, is the only humanity, ? ? ? that is RIGHT, but there are lots of others things to be concern about, lot's of things that me and my dear kind friend (DEAR SOUL) are trying to offer, i think protecting the moralities should be concern the most after supporting the main idea. There are lots of girls and women who are miss using around the world, ...! there are lots of minds which are dying because of the lack of equipments, there are thousand of other things that we (POETS + Writers) should concern! ! Thank you all because of your nice attention to Our work here Good luck.. Ellias

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Nader Baheri 05 September 2012

well.first of all i would like to thank you and dear Ellias. now my opinion is (who cares?) The stupid politicians or the gun makers? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? .the politicians who are the big fan of Machiavelli's theory. Certainly you have heard about YAN-YIN.it is a kind of bracelet in China.it shows that by the time humanity exists the war exists too.it also shows the battle between hatred and love or goodwill.I like your poem and i hope a better life or as you have said embracing life. Godbless and tnx.

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Unwritten Soul 05 September 2012

Everyone who read/ commented on this poem...Thanks for your time and comment..take this time to reply the question our friend, Nader asked, i loved to share some idea and thought about it...we start with his first question......... (Who cares?) I care and i think Ellias too...plus some supporters hahaha, i think the readers nod their head :) YAN-YIN...i am sure what you mean was actually Ying Yang my dear. I am not a chinese but i will agree some idea about it, anyway i always create my own version of ying yang, i create it to be Ying Yeng Yang (hahaha) why? Ying Yang made of two contrast color Black and White but my Ying Yeng Yang...have more Black-intermediates(colors) -white do you know Nader, Black absorb/is a mixture of all colors and white is contrast, just imagine if one absorb one reflect colors there must be a tone....could be a rainbow(fragmented colors) ....light and colors are unique as it actually can be in one appearance but not in reality....even if you not believe it, let we mix the black and white....it turns gray, not so Ying not so Yang...if we let black too much, it become darker tone near to black (YING) if too many white....it becomes Yang...if bad thing is more than good things then it create bad world so we need to encourage more good things to have more bright world, we cant make gray to be white but we can add some more white color to make the tone near to white, less dark...do u understand my dear friend? ? ...we have a will to change the destiny if we not make it, nothing will happen...at least we try....and truth will come out no matter how long it takes...believe me, thanks for reading, just share my idea thanks Nader for your question_Soul

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Captain Cur 07 September 2012

My Dear Soul, even though you and young Ellias are trying to put me out of the pirate business with this fine write, there is alway the poetry business. Is there much gold in poetry? All kidding aside love this write between two fine minds. Beautiful message expressed here.

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Abdallah Gamal 08 September 2012

My great friend, my dear brother, I've never read such an amazing write, or seen sech a beautiful picture, you know that you're the best poet here to me, and you prove that to me day after day. May Allah bless you my brother :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 October 2017

Although we are tired to hear those words still representation and repeating fall in ears. Living in the cage, they set our boundaries. Opposite sites are amazingly mysterious to perceive. Existence of love still motivates mind and invisible love embraces life. Voice echos and fear remains. But love overcomes fear and gives joy. Looking at open sky we realize God's creation. God's grace falls on us at each moment. Holding love in hand to make world survives is wise ever. Excellent poem is shared.10

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Aranthabailu Ummar 16 November 2012

no you are not in cages, you are in a plain ground there you can extend your love see the air blowing it will carry your wishes where you want when you want and to whom you want but when you going to make this with political face this face have many colours. politics starts from politicians and policies the heart of politicians are imbibed with many things and eventhou they have the love and peace mind to be recognized in this earth they playing many games there they are going to forget their originity so their policies and political decisions make them to over come human values and they are stick to some thing to destroy the human feelings and rights hence they ignored the importance of the child child birth and male and female comparision when they are sick to some ideas or opinions most of them will not think about the bad out comings so peace will always there as the word as we express it. because all the creature in this earth looking for it because no body really do not have it so peace be the word from the merciful lord as quran express it ok i read some the lines from your poem because i have a lack of time to go thru all the lines because it is too big so next i will look for the time and will go thru it any have thanks for good work and a day you will be recognized by the world people for the humble work whenver where ever you go high i will be there to prayer with allah to grow you more have a nice day yours onle au

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 15 October 2012

Every word is true, but on the other side we can see that everybody has to learn a lesson and some people can learn only through tragedy, like I did. I am happy I went through starvation, wars, dead bodies, because this way I can appreciate the good life better. Every second of my life is a thanksgiving to God that He gave me those terrible things and I could come out better from them. Some people have good life and still they are full with fear, worry, blame, and judgement, never have enough and so on.

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Wahab Abdul 30 September 2012

marvellous is only world fr yr poem!

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Asif Andalib 28 September 2012

I highly appreciate your concern. We all hate war and love peace but still war ravages civilization. Lovely poem

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