Yasmeen Khan


Winter Gloom - Poem by Yasmeen Khan

The howling winds, the biting chill
Of wintry nights reign vales and hills
All songs are ceased, trees in tears
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Comments about Winter Gloom by Yasmeen Khan

  • Gold Star - 8,432 Points Khalida Bano Ali (9/14/2014 2:13:00 AM)

    Memories of summer, spring's visions
    For bright morns we all wish and yearn
    A lovely write. (Report) Reply

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  • Bronze Star - 2,836 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (1/7/2014 1:29:00 PM)

    U paintd winter in spectacular chilly dreary scenes. I luv d poem n i also like winter since its misin here in Tz. D indian winters i hav seen is what dis made me miss. Kudos. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 543 Points Yasmeen Khan (1/6/2014 1:45:00 AM)

    @Shahzia, I'm graetful dear friend for taking time to dilate upon my babbling. I like the way you interpreted it as good critic of poetry. Such comments give life to poetry as compare to mere a few formal words.
    Thanks dear......... :)
    Yasmin (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 14,297 Points * Sunprincess * (1/2/2014 2:54:00 AM)

    .....you did very well with the description...you captured winter's gloom nicely.. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 749 Points Shahzia Batool (1/1/2014 11:04:00 AM)

    Wait Yasmeen!
    first let me glean some of your adjectives + nouns!


    howling winds, biting chill, wintry nights, autumnal hues, wounded leaves, dreary street, Rayless moon, bleak world,
    Specter shadows, bare boughs, bare earth, palsied blades, Grey sunrise, bright morns, bright spark...

    this is what i always say, a natural poet paints a picture with the tools of grammar, i love Keats for his grammatical word-painting!

    the lines are 14 but with a difference with 3 couplets in the beginning and 1 is the concluding one, as the poem is unlike the octave/sestet or 3 quatrains & a couplet, but you focused on conveying your meaning through imagery, and that is impressive...

    so nice lines:
    Rayless moon peers at the bleak world
    Specter shadows of bare boughs on bare earth
    Stand palsied blades of grass and some roses shrunk
    Grey sunrise, days in blanket of haze cold and stern
    Memories of summer, spring's visions
    For bright morns we all wish and yearn!

    good job! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,462 Points Tiku . (1/1/2014 8:30:00 AM)

    the gloom during winter painted so beautifully.liked it. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,502 Points Valerie Dohren (12/31/2013 1:50:00 PM)

    Think most of us are feeling the effects of Winter at this time of year - we need to keep focused on the coming Spring. A great write, and may I wish you a very Happy New Year. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 22,489 Points Valsa George (12/31/2013 7:47:00 AM)

    Let us hope that the winter won't linger long and verdant spring comes soon! The biting chill and sordidness of winter is powerfully presented! !

    Wish you Yasmeen, a joyous New Year of all possible blessings! ! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,732 Points Noreen Carden (12/29/2013 1:35:00 PM)

    Nice description of winter beautiful write (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,743 Points Geetha Jayakumar (12/29/2013 10:55:00 AM)

    Beautiful blanket of gloominess covering the wintery night. Loved it Yasmeen. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 169 Points marvin brato (12/27/2013 9:05:00 PM)

    Nice description about winter with gloomy mood, well-penned1 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 150 Points Muhammad Ali (12/25/2013 11:01:00 AM)

    winter gloom. nice theme and nicely expressed. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Paddy D Daly (12/23/2013 11:42:00 PM)

    thump on my dear, thump on (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,064 Points Kanav Justa (12/22/2013 10:13:00 AM)

    Some wounded leaves scream under-feet
    As I tread and thump on a dreary street

    wow, , wonderful lines, , , , very well done, , , (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,253 Points Unwritten Soul (12/22/2013 5:57:00 AM)

    This seasonal poetry done in very poetic view, mimicking the nature but written in paper..wonderful write Yasmeen_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,953 Points Sallam Yassin (12/21/2013 4:40:00 PM)

    gloom of winter there
    but in deep of heart there
    the hope is hidden and wait there/ bright (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,366 Points Ramesh Rai (12/21/2013 1:36:00 PM)

    I think this one is the best depiction of gloomy night.
    beautiful write. (Report) Reply










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