Winter's Maid Poem by elysabeth faslund

Winter's Maid

Rating: 5.0


Maids of Spring, Summer, Fall...
Sleeping, tucked cozy under bowers.
Dreaming, waiting awakening.
The fourth sister, Winter's Maid

Treads on barefeet, daintily, laughing.
Ah, she is a pretty thing, palest of hair,
Skin...tinsel-colored eyes...
A touch...last color from leaves, fades,

Trunks greyer, air chillier, grasses brown.
Squirrels flick tails in warning. She smiles.
With one foot, she tosses leaves aside, a bare
Patch of ground. What's this? Looking around,

She takes things from her robe's pockets...
Sprinkles them on the ground. Covers
These with leaves. Laughs...knows
Her sister, Spring's Maid, always thought

It was she...never
Winter's Maid.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
R H 20 December 2007

An enchanting and mystic poem that took me to a woodland setting full of sprites and dryads and nymphs...you paint a magically mischievous winters maid... justine.

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... ... 18 December 2007

Is fantastic really! , I'll give you 20 ponts for this!

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Thad Wilk 16 December 2007

A sneaky sister that Winters Maid! Nice one Elysabeth! ! *10*! ! ! Thad

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elysabeth faslund

elysabeth faslund

Thibodaux. Louisiana
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