Wisdom And Love Poem by Aufie Zophy

Wisdom And Love

Rating: 3.0


I,
oh no, you,
I want to start not with I
but with you

Feelings of love
Eternal warmth is mine,
No, yours and mine
Wisdom from above
Light will brightly shine
On me,
On you and me

Becoming one, wisdom and love
Light and warmth melting in each other
Empathy and compassion, love
Humbleness and honesty, wisdom
Integrity and innocence, love
Justice, wisdom
Love and wisdom all around
Warmth and light unite
For you and me,
For us,
Yes, we.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amrit Rathi 23 July 2010

A poem in Vedic Tradition! Starting on noble path together and then extending and enveloping the universe-that is the zenith of human evolution. Thanks.10+++

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Lynn Glover 23 July 2010

Wisdon and Love combined together make a very happy person. Good Write, Lynn

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Feelings of love Eternal warmth is mine, No, yours and mine Wisdom from above Light will brightly shine... it is feeling of eternal warmth... nicely worded poem....10

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Colin J... 26 July 2010

One Day I hope we will realise that we are all ONE... Maybe then we will find peace... Colin J...

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Malaya Roses 02 August 2010

Down to earth poem and i can feel how is faith can lead a person to be at different level of mentality. Since the faith path never bring us down but healer for the wounded, we should pray that many more will change their individualism priorities to humanity based decision. Excellent.

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Maria C. Pires Costa 03 March 2013

This is fraught with noble feelings and the essence of what being human is. It has also incorporated light and wisdom granted on us, coming from above! Beautiful poetic thread! Absolutely fraternal. Maria

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Lenore Lee 12 December 2011

This is such an amazing poem. It is so passionate and heartfelt. I particulary adore the way you pointed out that love can be perfect if you're wise about it. Truly beautiful.

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Cristina Teodor 02 December 2011

Love and wisdom blending in unity as the essence and quintessence of life. Wonderful written..Cristina Teodor

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Unwritten Soul 07 May 2011

Nice it is like You and Him/her= they, You and I= we,7days= a week 12 months=a year... i mean i like the way u describe 'a love' exist by two individuals and universal love for humanity come from thousands of people...it just creating A Big love :) Nice work and wisdom and love all collide to offer a great life to start_Unwritten soul

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Okan Emanet 02 August 2010

this poem has really aroused inexplicable emotions in me because of the situation I am in these days... I really thank you a lot for such fabulous work...

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