Wise Man - On Love Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Wise Man - On Love

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This wise man thought
The world is not a place to live
Why not take his beloved
To sky where they would dwell
In peace with stars and moon around
Nobody will bother them
Nobody will disturb them
And they will live in eternal peace
Soul united in space without hindrance
The body was left stagger
The union was really a difficult task
Earth is the only place which has
Both pleasure and joy with trial and turbulence

Monday, November 16, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rahman Henry 16 November 2015

I agreed. Beauty of thought. Wonderful poem...

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Darren Jkoeryo 16 November 2015

The joy of living on earth is unexplainable.......10

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Juhaina Tumlu 25 July 2020

A thoughtful poem, No escape from this world,10

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Mihaela Pirjol 08 December 2015

A world of contrasts and paradoxes such as Earth; is a world for the human-soul to evolve. A thoughtful write.

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Liza Sudina 18 November 2015

Earth is the only place - for humans on this stage of evolution may be. But Seers say - there are other better and worse worlds.

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Kelly Kurt 16 November 2015

We must take the good with the bad, for we have no choice

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Souren Mondal 16 November 2015

Yes Asim.. Life and love is not aboit 'escaping' the troubles, but facing them.. A beautiful and wise write.10 :)

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