Wish And Wash Away Poem by David Morales

Wish And Wash Away

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Is all a still thought
Closer to the shore's waves
Your mind bares sound that
Brings hopes and kills them
I wish she were here now
But like all wishes

Wash away like waves

Wish and was away

Hurt and leaves healing
Like remembering
And like forgetting
I wish she wants me
But remember that no
She doesn't, and forget
Because like all wishes

Wash away like waves

Wish and wash away

Standing in wet sand
Sinking momentarily
But walk and watch waves
Wash foot prints away
Now I wish she were gone
Sadly all wishes

Wash away like waves

Wish and wash away

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chris G. Vaillancourt 14 October 2009

An impressive, mind-boggling well done write

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Nathan Barkley 13 October 2009

I really like the comparison in the last stanza with the foot prints disappear last with your wishes pretty good

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