Wish You’d Care Poem by Charlie F. Kane

Wish You’d Care

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This is a big, big place,
And it be out of line for a guy like me
To so much as began to ask your name.
You know just how pretty you are,
I guess you just caught my eye
But how I wish, I wish you’d care.

I can pretend all I like
To be somebody I’m not
In order to set out to win you,
But I can never change who I am
And you’d never ask me to stay.
How I wish, I wish you’d care.

My drink has run out,
And I don’t think I can take any more
So it’s now or never
Just to ask your name,
But instead I shuffle right by you,
And I never see you again.
How I wish, I wish you’d care.

©Charlie F. Kane

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marvin Brato 26 October 2007

Take the courage for once to win the love of your life, for if not you will never be happt! Good write, top marks.

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Charlie F. Kane

Charlie F. Kane

Solihull, Birmingham
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