Wish You Were Dead Poem by Rebecca Succes

Wish You Were Dead



wish you were dead

my life would be more happy

l can do what l want

say what l want to say

do me

wish you were dead

no complaining

no lie

no making my life a living hell

wish you were dead

my emotions wouldn't be damaged

my attitude would be better

my mind would be focused

wish you were dead

wish you were dead

wish you were dead

l forget you are dead

l stand at your tombstone

throw flowers on your grave

and say l'm sorry l killed you

but you left me no choice.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Scarred Jefe 13 July 2016

So how come you didntblet a man die in 2013 ?

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Uche Chidozie 24 December 2011

Wish you were dead..flashes deep mood of frustration received from a lover or loved ones, the poem is well organised, keep it up Rebacca

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Vipins Puthooran 24 December 2011

The twist in this poem is beautiful/ good write! !

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Bethany Buhl 24 December 2011

This is very interesting. I like how you put a little twist in the end of the poem. I thought it was gonna go somewhere is when I first read the first couple of lines, but I love how you ended the poem.

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