Wishes Poem by gul naz

Wishes

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In the journey of life
I met so many characters
They were different and distinctive
They had wishes and desires
Desires to earn more and more
for this life
They were ferocious
to satiate their wishes
Then I met other people
People who had
one wish one desire
Desire to earn for eternity
Those were the people
most contented
most satisfied

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ency Bearis 15 July 2009

a good observation and to its true...and nicely written in poetic diction.....10

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In the journey of life I met so many characters They were different and distinctive They had wis......... lovely write..beautiful presentation.... u deserve..10 read mine.. anywhere, desire, , i am disgrace and you go away...

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Ejaz Khan 04 July 2009

Good observation, people, who cares about different kind of wealth are happier. A good write!

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Laurence Bourke 04 July 2009

a nicely done piece, i am in agreement with yoru observations and i was very into this poem! ! your message is one that we can all take something from and that is great! ! keep it up! !

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