Jayne Davies

Rookie - 162 Points (5th October 1960 / Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff)

Wishful Thinking - Poem by Jayne Davies

I woke up this morning,
Couldn't stop yawning!
Reality, entered my head,
I had this idea,
Sweet memories so dear,
I must get them out of my head.

The sinks full of dishes,
My heads full of wishes,
I need to express how I feel,
So I take pen to paper,
And half hour later,
My words are now wrote,
Signed and sealed.

This poetry lark's
Like a stroll in the park,
It eases the tension away,
Like a long soothing hug,
Nothing more do I love,
Now it's here,
It's here to stay.


Comments about Wishful Thinking by Jayne Davies

  • Rookie - 162 Points Jayne Davies (7/13/2013 9:33:00 AM)

    Thanks! So glad you like it! (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 3,250 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (7/13/2013 3:35:00 AM)

    a vivid portrayal of the state when the mind is unburdened of its load of thoughts. great write Jayne. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, July 13, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, August 1, 2013


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