Wishful Thinking Poem by Akhil Shah

Wishful Thinking

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Times through, but this girl is still around
Her birth a sin, now she finds herself bound

Her bravery is immense, the thoughts are dense
Dreams of the world, but desires in a circumference.

Humorous isn't it? how even the sublime moon,
also has a slight patch
So I make her living easy, tell her
all these things are a catch

Innocence, her preach.
she hangs to my promises but embark
My liberator,
How would light evade this dark?

When would I get to sail the endless sky,
To dance till the end when I'm left to die.
The liberator evokes, conveys her tenderly
We are souls destined to become anything it be

And she clings yet again, afraid of the fall
Calls me a preacher and I'm a million times tall

She seeks a place, where the heart could lie
and soul respite
Away from these weary creatures, astray
to war and fight

A little gift of joy,
a candle of happiness
Smiles cracking the air,
tidying the mess

Her thought is now a rainbow,
yet the heart remains blue
And here I am creating a magic wand,
wishing that all her dreams come true.

Wednesday, August 5, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: joy,wish
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 13 August 2015

Lovely and very romantic piece of poetry, subtly penned in poetic diction with beautiful rhyme scheme. A heartwarming depiction blissful experience of love. Thanks for sharing Akhil. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kelly Kurt 05 August 2015

Very lovely, Akhil. I hope you continue to post

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Fabrizio Frosini 05 August 2015

An inspiring piece of writing. Thanks for sharing, Akhil

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