With Every Poem by Naida Nepascua Supnet

With Every

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With every knowing glances
My heart leaps My heart dances
With every blink of your eyes
My every worry flies

With every squeeze of your hand
Is a language I understand
With every pat on my shoulder
I am safe I remember

With every assuring smile
I can walk any mile
With every nice gesture
All things are done for sure

Because your glances are magical
Your blinks are amazing
Your hand squeeze is the final
The final thing I am feeling

Your shoulder pat brings courage
Your smile can cure a pain
Your nice gesture can erase
Every problem in my brain

I meet your glance, I see your blinks
I squeeze your hand and pat you too
I return your smile I return nice gesture
You're home, you're home I'm no longer blue.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 12 December 2010

Fantastic poem with vivid imagery and off course a very simple style yet fascinating. I like the way you use your figures of speech. Nice write.

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Mary Louise Mann Gabumpa 14 December 2010

nice poem to hold on to with every beat of the heart...

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Kevin Patrick 26 October 2011

The versus are gentle, and its full of amazing imagery conveying charming and endeuring sentiments of love. It's Nice and cozy.

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Allemagne Roßmann 30 August 2011

Words of love galore.....they melt from your eyes..they erupt from your mouth...words which were so long clustered in you like honeycomb or hive..sweet write here...

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Umar J Wilson lll 03 March 2011

Very nice poem with a lot of imagery

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Anna Petrashishina 08 February 2011

yey hes finally home! all those lonely night are worth going through when you can finally spend a lifetime together

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Kevin Carney 18 December 2010

Your shoulder pat brings courage Your smile can cure a pain Your nice gesture can erase Every problem in my brain I love these lines it paints such a picture of love. Your poem is a pleasure to read and enjoy. Great write.

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Naida Nepascua Supnet

Naida Nepascua Supnet

bayambang, pangasinan, philippines
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