hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 81,518 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

With No Liability - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

It was pure thought
Always in mind and seriously fought
Why not develop intimacy?
And increase the frequency

It needed privacy
As she proved to be my fiancée
I was attached and drawn
She now became fully know

I eagerly used to wait
If she was even one minute late
It made me furious often
As she might come any time all of sudden

Any how, it made me sincere
Purely accidental but as honest lover
She was lucky to have me
As I was independent and free

Some thoughts always puzzled
As rain almost dazzled
How to keep privacy when we met?
We kept door opened or let as it was

She might often say no
“Let wind come and go”
We are friends first
Let relation turn into fact at last

I appreciated her views
They were not hollow but true
It gave me mental stability
As it was perfect with no liability

Comments about With No Liability by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 81,518 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/3/2013 12:50:00 AM)


    Hikmet KARAKAS1 minute ago
    nice poem (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 81,518 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/3/2013 12:47:00 AM)


    Angelique Brown1 minute ago
    good (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 3, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, October 3, 2013

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