hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 44,557 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

With No Shift - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

The more Time to take and forgive
Take serious lead
And properly read

What does the relation stand?
How do we take it on and understand
It is not infatuation
But feeling is not in question

You must decide
Before take decision and confide
The love has its meaning
To see shine on face in morning

So I take on
As if battle is won
It is open road
Leave peacefully without any load

Hardly few people honor
With expectations no more
For them relation is sacred
They have understood and read

So stay blessed
Never stand as chance missed
It is heavenly gift
Stand firm with no shift


Comments about With No Shift by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 44,557 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/22/2013 10:19:00 AM)

    good


    Shakil Ahmed Baliyavi4 minutes ago
    good poem................
    Comment +1
    Interesting (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 44,557 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/22/2013 10:19:00 AM)

    Naveed Khalid5 minutes ago
    spontaneous enough! It takes awhile to write of what you intend to dig deep by shifting the lines more often. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 44,557 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/22/2013 10:19:00 AM)

    The more Time to take and forgive
    Take serious lead
    And properly read (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, July 22, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, July 23, 2013


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