Manonton Dalan

(virginia, usa)

...with smile


yes... i heard
your crispy voice
enough to give beats
to my resting senses

it feels so good
you couldn’t imagine
the joy you have given me
hope you do the same

i wanted to listen more
as i journey to dreams
in my private paradise
where sweet words rise
like steam from newly cook rice
flirting to softness of breeze
i can’t wait to hear again
have a wonderful evening

Submitted: Monday, November 17, 2008

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  • Ken E Hall (3/18/2010 7:08:00 PM)

    Very soft and inviting poem for the resting senses to
    keep our love hearts beating nice one
    regards (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/14/2010 8:41:00 PM)

    yes... i heard
    your crispy voice
    enough to give beats
    to my resting senses
    it feels so good
    you couldn’t imagine
    the joy you have given me
    hope you do the same.lovely poem i can't resisting adding something to it... i liked it....

    I am here
    you are there
    still i bear
    continously hear
    your foot steps
    it creates some sense
    m not at all tense
    it is unique
    i too seek
    your company
    there are not many
    you are one and only one
    come to me as only one--

    read mine smile.... smile with laughter (Report) Reply

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