With Total Gloom Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

With Total Gloom

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I walk barefoot
On the road to shoot at
And to draw the attention
With a view to build relation

I want people to know
That I am fully naked and wanted to show
All my weaknesses and malicious mind
It is for them to know and find

I am the one like them and remain among
Does all kind of dirty work and commit wrong?
Clam clemency little later as human being
Where as notorious ideas continuously ring

You try to cheat on me and I try same on you
It is to be seen later who prevails through
It is generally not objected to
We all have to depend one another and prefer not to react

I am fully clad in white dress
There is bright smile on face
It presents calm and peace
But internally it is totally at unease

Mind is cunningly on venture
How to spoil other’s future?
How to grab their share and make fool?
Only to show how it can be proved successful

We talk of humanity
Misuse the talent and quality
We care for no poor or needy
Only we press more to prove really greedy

We plead helplessness
With total gloom on face
Try to seek sympathy later as helpless human
But what did we do as life of man and woman?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 November 2013

Poetry Chanlar Rangel4 minutes ago Your poetic prowess is not lost on me. I rather enjoyed this and felt like I was understanding what was being said. Keep this up, you are very good at it. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 November 2013

Jared Peterson3 minutes ago Sounds gritty I quickly get the mental picture but I cant place the emotion. I will try reading it again. Comment +1 ok

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 November 2013

M. Smith4 minutes ago Was ok

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 November 2013

Luz Joveres likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 November 2013

I walk barefoot On the road to shoot at 32667

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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