With You Poem by Aabid Masroor

With You

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So this is who I am
I carry you with me
So this is who I was
Went mute, broken for no cause

With you my land was free
As vast as ocean by
Where no harm could befall
Where flowers and mighty river fall

With you my days were bright
Cool breeze, blossom bloom and golden sights
Shielded by mountain from every side
As mother embrace, cuddle her child


With you _Oh my poem, the moist breeze of ideas
Had left me all about you
Took me high as stars above
Filled my heart with lust and love

With you when flowers smelled
The soft breeze would pass by
Spring has come again with arise
My days are paradise

With you I was a complete man
Would differentiate loss and gain
Without you I die and cry
Please don't say good bye
Please don't say good bye…

Sunday, January 31, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: you
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 12 February 2018

Passionate rendition from the heart nicely embellished in poetic rhyme with conviction. Very heartfelt. Thanks for sharing Aabid.

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Roseann Shawiak 22 February 2016

Sad, heart wrenching poem, all is beautiful when your love is with you, without it your entire world dies. A heartfelt plea to love not to say goodbye. Touched my heart, Aabid. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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