Withered Leaf Poem by darlric john lotik

Withered Leaf

Rating: 5.0


Something floats in the air
Travel from a stem to somewhere
Through a land like a bed
Extends to a point in a thread

In a wide paradise, it fades
Under the sun's glowing shades
Scorching rays, it withered
Dreams not granted and being shattered

Things attach to the trees
Flows the appearance all with the breeze
A dream struggling in a cliff
And was only, a withered leaf

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 12 July 2009

nice lyric poem, well written..10

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~ Jon London ~ 12 July 2009

Great work....your select imagery drives this dreamy piece home....lovely

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