Within The Dew Poem by Aftab Alam

Within The Dew

Rating: 5.0


O my love, why sat beyond the edge?
Away from universe, away from the hedge
Come to me with thy courage-
I keepeth for thee, starry scarf
Earring of Sun and Moon
A garment made of mystery mist
Come to me with thy courage
With thy fragrance of musk
Waiting here up to dusk
Come, Come to me, before dark
Singing like a lark
Swimming like a shark
Come to me with soughing,
With heavenly hue, coloring.
Come, I’ll wipe thy tears
Here alone, I am melting.
Wanna to be an ocean;
Within the dew.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Farah Ilyas 21 June 2013

Beautiful imagery has been embellished by endearing smith flow of rhythm & rhyme, use of diction is fabulous...especially written with the warmth of emotions, indeeed romantic poem..

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R.j. Wynn 21 June 2013

It's very beautiful beyong explanation, and fittingly fixed with the beginning at the end, focused well.

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Sallam Yassin 21 June 2013

that's the magic within dew the beauty of universe dwells in one heart

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Valsa George 25 June 2013

The longing to merge with the loved one is beautifully expressed through imagery drawn from Nature! There are some beautiful lines in the poem which I enjoyed much!

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Heather Wilkins 23 June 2013

lovely imagery within the dew. beautifylly expressed

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Hazel Durham 22 June 2013

Stunning write with beautiful and mesmerizing lines! Love this very inspired write!

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Yasmin Khan 22 June 2013

A lovely poem expressing the heart's deepest wish in images of nature

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Unwritten Soul 21 June 2013

Wanna be ocean just by a dew I know because i wish it too As we know the pure love they do In droplet from above, symbolic for life being new A pure one, clean from any torture view...._SOul

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