Without Him Poem by Beach Girl

Without Him

Rating: 4.3


Breathe in
Breathe out
Lost my heart
To a friend

Close my eyes
Open them
He's not here
He's never been

Rain falls
Sun shines
Tears flow
The heart sighs

Sun rises
Night falls
Another day
Without him

Thursday, December 26, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: love and pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Savita Tyagi 12 March 2017

simple words that touch the heart. Great write BeachGirl.

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Shahzia Batool 09 January 2014

very rhythmic feel...a nice read offered! ! !

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Gajanan Mishra 26 December 2013

nice write, I like it, lovely.

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Khairul Ahsan 26 December 2013

Just read this poem, it's very nice. You have described the feelings that one has when one is 'In Love'. 'Rain falls Sun shines Tears flow The heart sighs' Beautiful!

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Suman Kumar Das 26 December 2013

a beautiful expression..........................loved this pen.....

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Rob Lamberton 20 December 2022

Tears flow The heart sighs Sun rises Night falls Another day

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Dr Antony Theodore 14 August 2019

Rain falls Sun shines Tears flow The heart sighs... without him.. very nice poem. makes us think a lot. tony

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Sochukwu Ivye 28 October 2017

Lenience and grandeur in play. Elegant piece, poetess.

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Chinedu Dike 12 September 2017

It's heart touching deep feelings impressively brought forth with insight. Thanks for sharing.

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Jazib Kamalvi 08 August 2017

A good attempt in the chapter of life without love. Thank you very much.

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