What am I without you?
Just a point in space,
A whisper, emotion,
Without a face.
What am I without you?
Just fallen grace,
A shadow that trembles,
An empty embrace,
That makes the World,
The Loneliest place.
Dear Mr. Ahsan, What you wrote below is better than what I wrote above, Thanks, S.
In other words, may I say: The point in space becomes A big enigmatic circle, The whisper the sweetest delight, , The emotion the most intense urge, When you and me unite. The grace gets personified, The trembling shadow altogether disappears The embrace becomes divinely dignified, And permanently locked not in disguise, And the world an indestructible paradise!
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I would like to translate this poem
You are always generous in complimenting, Ms. Feldman! Thank you.