Bernard Snyder

Veteran Poet - 1,951 Points (11-07-1959 / Savannah Ga.)

'Without You' - Poem by Bernard Snyder

The love songs I used to sing for you
now just seem like shattered words,
the white doves that followed us along the beaches
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Comments about 'Without You' by Bernard Snyder

  • Bronze Star - 2,314 Points Kewayne Wadley (4/2/2015 11:47:00 AM)

    Nicely written! Beautiful show of emotion here. The up's and down's that accompany loves essence (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 935 Points Damian Murphy (3/1/2015 1:13:00 AM)

    a lovely sentiment beautifully expressed. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 24,077 Points Chinedu Dike (1/9/2015 5:53:00 PM)

    A beautiful train of thoughts well encapsulated into a lovely poem. You employment of similes to drive home your convictions is quite appropriate and poetically remarkable. A lovely piece of poetry nicely written in poetic diction. Thanks for sharing and always remain blessed. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,884 Points Patricia Grantham (10/10/2014 6:35:00 AM)

    Nothing is ever the same if true love is not
    there to lift it up. The beauty of your thoughts
    shines in this write. Lovely expressions. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (9/18/2014 1:02:00 AM)

    Ups and down...happiness and sorrow and again happiness well expressed (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 558 Points Tribhawan Kaul (9/8/2014 2:45:00 AM)

    Feeling beautifully expressed in the lovely poem. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,222 Points David Harris (9/5/2014 4:00:00 AM)

    A great poem. There is so much feeling there. A pleasure to read. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,802 Points Heather Wilkins (8/19/2014 3:18:00 PM)

    a beautiful worded love poem without you the nights are long (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,232 Points Tiku . (8/1/2014 1:22:00 AM)

    beautiful love poem.nice flow and rhyme.liked it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,750 Points Electric Lady (8/1/2014 1:02:00 AM)

    Hi Bernard! This poem is absolutely stunning! Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,761 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (7/22/2014 4:11:00 PM)

    Loaded with love, loss and loneliness. Well done my friend! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,761 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (7/22/2014 4:10:00 PM)

    Loaded with love, loss and loneliness. Well done my friend! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 404 Points Rekha Mandagere (8/1/2013 2:47:00 PM)

    Lovely poem. I enjoyed the diction and the rhythm of the poem. The theme, ' How beautiful life can be if we are there for each other: -) is silently moving in the background of natural landscape'. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,921 Points Babatunde Aremu (8/1/2013 9:35:00 AM)

    A very romantic and emotion poem. I like the use of imageries. Great write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 278 Points Jack Growden (8/1/2013 5:30:00 AM)

    PLEASE READ MY COLLECTION! ! ! I am a young, aspiring poet. Please feel free to rate them and comment your thoughts. Thanks, Jack Growden (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 26 Points Joseph Poewhit (8/1/2013 5:08:00 AM)

    Spilt glass of love in life [mess] (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Dineo Tladi (8/2/2012 6:54:00 AM)

    Wow....... Love realy plays a big role in our lives n wen its lost most thingz jst stand still, some of them even loose their worth.... #I like (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,971 Points Kee Thampi (8/2/2012 2:07:00 AM)

    a great poem to read today (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 206 Points Guy Lip-more (8/1/2012 3:37:00 PM)

    Heart felt poem.really liked. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Faith Pfumbidza (8/1/2012 10:25:00 AM)

    love always heads in a different direction we want to take and the hurtful part is that it always leave us hurting as we meet those things that we always used to see when we used to enjoy it thus 'the raindropp we used to listen, no longer have that pleasant tone.' (Report) Reply










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