*~- Without You -~* Poem by Thad Wilk

*~- Without You -~*

Rating: 3.0


Without you ~

I would never have known the bliss
that your tender kiss dost bring.
I would never have seen the heaven
that you have shown me, nor hear
the songs the angels sing.

Without you ~

An emptiness, I would then possess
the rest - of my life through.
I know not what, I would do then.
I could never bare this sadness and
despair. My world would never be the
same again.

Without you ~

The stars would no longer light the sky
and the moon above; without you an I
both there to gaze upon it - lovingly.
Would surely fall from up above and
sink, beneath the sea - The darkness
then; 'twould be my only friend,
my only company.......

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~TJW~

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C T Heart 01 December 2008

Without you, such a poignant composition, well crafted with words that would melt you down to the core.... without you--- T'would surely sink, beneath the sea - The darkness then, it would be my only Friend - My only company....... so true to all those who are so much in love. You're my number one...

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Morin 7231 01 December 2008

so sweet, i love it.

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Kesav Easwaran 24 March 2009

romantic eloquence is your speciality, Thad...i liked this write very much...10

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Ivor Hogg 13 December 2008

You certainly express your love eloquently and often She is a lucky lady

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Sebastine Humaemo 13 December 2008

without you, she cant be full without you, her love goes to mute without you, her heart stops to thrive without you, her mind stops to think without you, even her smile turns to false without you, she's seen with tear drops when you both united.....your love seems to be enlighted.....10+...........

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Meggie Gultiano 12 December 2008

enjoyed reading this, Friend Thad.So lovely.Another great piece of yours Hugs, Meggie

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Andrew Blakemore 02 December 2008

Lovely words Thad, the Texas romantic strikes again. Excellent poem my friend. Best wishes, Andrew

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