Without You…&…with You Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Without You…&…with You

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I am incomplete........Without you
Life is uninteresting....Without you
Realities are dream........Without you
And dreams are realities.........Without you

Heart beats but misses’ life.......Without you
Eye sees but not admires beauty......Without you
Goals achieved are not milestones......Without you
Judgments gets jeopardize.................Without you

All dreams comes true...........................With You
Happiness expands and surrounds...............With You
Mountain looks like ground.................With You
Thoughts goes fine......................With You

Time stops around.....................With You
Wind composes songs...............With You
Journey looks short...........With you
Nothing goes wrong.......With you

Thursday, September 17, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ratnakar Mandlik 17 September 2015

Beautiful submission of facts before the most cherished companion.Enjoyed the poem.

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T Rajan Evol 24 July 2020

In unique style. Nicely thought.

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Deepak S S 16 July 2020

Wonderful style and nice poem.

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T Rajan Evol 10 February 2016

Unique in style..........10

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Sanjukta Nag 18 September 2015

Well knitted comparison elevating the power of love. Beautiful work

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Bharati Nayak 17 September 2015

Love makes such big difference.Nice poem.

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