Woman's Womb Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
Woman's Womb
Why woman is forced upon to bear a child?
Is it because she is so gracious and mild?
Is that whole universe is so proud of her stature?
Is she paramount factor that she cares not for her future?
If I go for any dictionary word in her praise, I won’t
It will be dropp of water from sea to be collected on boat
What world will be rewarding to honor her womb?
She has many secrets to reveal and to explode as bomb
How much dishonor she retains to face the world?
How much disregard we may with attitude so cold?
Does she ever complain anybody what suffering she is passing into?
I am afraid there is no answer to be exactly correct or true
How is that she is called upon to sacrifice first
Why man is never blamed and stands always last?
He has always considered her as instrument for lust
Why not he is forced to undergo punishment just?
Preference for womanhood to protect man from embarrassment
Insults to be borne all the times and face crisis any moment
Rapprochement with a child with status of single mother
Who is to be blamed, take note or sincerely bother?
Mother in all forms are adorable and needs proper care
No one should violate her modesty or simply dare
Birth place for all mankind till the world lasts
Performing bad acts under the disguise or mast
World may wake up to the hard facts and reality
They may see the reason behind with its futility
It is restoration of respect for mother’s wishes
May prefer death to life before she ends up or finishes
Even God has chosen to be a child of mother
She has been glorified all the times but not father
We may go to the extent of granting her sacred place
No one on earth can unset her or replace
Is there any compulsion to go for anguish and enduring pain?
Is it not futile attempt to malign her or to slain?
We have done enough to push her to gallows
Promises made with good words never to follow
It will be human tragedy if we fail to accord holy status
All achievements will bear no mark and considered as minus
We can’t be failed for the simple reason of cowardice act
What have we to offer honestly and unreasonably to react?
It will be great tribute to all mothers who have suffered
Undergone all treacherous treatment and not single word uttered
I feel pinch of salt at heart and wish to bow head
Few good lines from my side in honor to be read
a grandeur womb of every woman.....as the pleasure assure in every coitus, then life would be very special....without such feeling womb will be nothing to stay...for a woman womb, man can't fathom His greatness..... Cheer up dear poet my bow of happiness be with you. God bless.... a Star and 10 +++++
Hasmukh, you are the best son of the Goddess of genesis....endless times I bow to you....with lots of thanks lots of 10s
Hello Hasmukh! I was surprised to see that you have about (439) poems. That means you are a proliferous poet. Frankly, I am not able to read all of them at the moment. I just start with 'Woman's womb'. In its theme it is well chosen for 'Woman is half a society' as we say in Tunisia. Here I would like to comment upon both the 'good' and the 'bad' points of your poem. First it is good to start your poem with the four opening questions: 'Why woman is forced upon to bear a child? ' 'Is it because she is so gracious and mild? ' 'Is that whole universe is so proud of her stature? ' 'Is she paramount factor that she cares not for her future? ' That is great to draw the attention of the Reader / Listener to your problematicity that will be solved throughout the intervening verses but please pay attention to the grammaticality of: 'Why woman is forced upon to bear a child? ' Please pay attention to the inversion rule in questioning. Many poets mis-interpret the poetic license which is another matter. In general your poem is of great value but there is the problem of 'Directness'. In poetry one should avoid that otherwise his / her 'poem' will lose its essence. Example: 'No one should violate her modesty or simply dare' That looks like a legal order: 'No driver should park here or dare' You see there is no difference between your verse and this prohibition sign! There are many other verses that should be re-formulated. Finally, this is but an opinion with all my respect and encouragement.
Mehta Ji, the words are falling short, but the way you have honoured the woman it is the right place, whether, mother, sister, wife or daughter, their place and love is un forgetable. every one should take a lesson from this write - I rank it perfectly -10
How much dishonor she retains to face the world? How much disregard we may with attitude so cold?
'Mother in all forms are adorable and needs proper care No one should violate her modesty or simply dare Birth place for all mankind till the world lasts Performing bad acts under the disguise or mast.'. Very often we forget that our mother is also a woman. While thinking about a woman let the image of mother come in the heart. Well written thesis of womanhood.. Thanks for sharing..
Hasmukh gee adab: Same blood same thinking: Fist lesson we were tought was; there is heaven under the feet of mother: That is start and end of this worthy state of our being.
A woman's womb is her only strength to claim universal womanhood first-that they are creators of men and not men.Men are only catalysts meant to be for the making of a woman.Nothing more.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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this is related to womanhood...this poem has a deep meaning..so nice and so beautifulll...