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Women Are The Best - Poem by Hebert Logerie

Woman, Femme
Mujer, Mama
Soul, Ame
Fleur, Flora

Life is beautiful
With so many other wonderful
Languages

Throughout the ages
Women continue to be
The reasons why we are alive

I gave all women 5/5
For their external
And their internal
Beauty

They come under different name
At the end of the day, they are all the same
The Earth will always be round
No matter what, no matter what sound
They express under stress
They still clean our mess
Women are the best
Because they ace all of the tests.


Comments about Women Are The Best by Hebert Logerie

  • Dr.tony Brahmin Dr.tony Brahmin (10/1/2015 9:28:00 PM)

    They express under stress
    They still clean our mess
    Women are the best
    Because they ace all of the tests.
    The uniqueness of each woman, the general character of a woman as you see it.. you have brought out very well. thank you dear Poet. (Report) Reply

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  • Jaishree Nair (5/12/2015 1:06:00 AM)

    Your basic idea was to pay tribute to women.considering that all the lines are aptly penned, but each woman has got her own uniqueness of character. Thanks Your basic idea was to pay tribute to women.considering that all the lines are aptly penned, but each woman has got her own uniqueness of character. Thanks (Report) Reply

  • Kim Barney (5/11/2015 6:30:00 AM)

    I think your intent was to pay tribute to women, but I'm sure many would be offended by the line THEY ARE ALL THE SAME. They are all different. Every woman is unique, and every woman is special. My wife, my mother, my grandmothers, my stepmother, my sisters, my stepsisters, my daughters, my granddaughters, my cousins... the list goes on and on. YOUR loved ones and every other woman in the world. Unique and special.
    In any case, congrats on having it chosen as Poem of the Day! (Report) Reply

  • Luis Estable (5/11/2015 3:22:00 AM)

    I see that the writer of this poem is trying to make a case why, According to him, women are the best. The case made for this is not one that is very strong, but some readers might be convinced or brought to his corner on this. I for one make the answer that no one kind is beter than any other. All kinds have good and bad qualities and so is the case with men and women, not one is over the other, but both make a whole that gives the whole thing down here on earth a complete circle.

    Nevertheless I did have joy going through this try and having given it my humble comment.

    Luis Estable (Report) Reply

  • Marama Kelly (9/22/2009 2:44:00 AM)

    Thank you for sharing your thoughts, view and concept with the rest of us.
    An interesting read indeed. Although it has a wonderful theme, it does tend to stutter instead of flow freely. I found the imagery that your words painted create a picture in abstract even though the words used describe passionately your views of the feminine persuasion. Overall it is a nice poem to read, although some wording and structure could improve it a bit more to give it flow and rhythmn. Thanks for inviting me to read and many blessings to you (Report) Reply

  • Ro'ya Abdulaal (9/4/2009 7:47:00 PM)

    wow, a lovely idea expressed amazingly (Report) Reply

  • Pamela Jokerst (8/29/2009 7:19:00 PM)

    I enjoyed the message/concept of your poem that expresses the consistancy that is 'woman' no matter what culture. I like the inclusion of a woman's emotion side offering an inference that even in these emotional 'stress' moments or spin-outs, it's still part of her beauty or what makes her 'woman.' The lines that seemed out of place and threw me off a bit are the lines that discuss the earth: 'the earth will always be round, no matter what, no matter what sound.' I guess is that the speaker in a metaphorical way is comparing the earth to 'woman' as a means to enhance or continue to convey the constantness that is 'woman' and in that-there the beauty lies. Was that your intent or did I get it totally wrong? Over all I see the poem as a tribute to women...thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Adeiza A. (8/25/2009 2:33:00 PM)

    This is cool Herbert. Nicely written (Report) Reply

  • Shirin Sheikhi Shirin Sheikhi (8/23/2009 2:13:00 PM)

    thnank you for such nice expression
    your poem beautiful specially in concept
    10++ (Report) Reply

  • Harold K Schreiberg Harold K Schreiberg (8/23/2009 11:23:00 AM)

    Yes, Women are the best
    They make life beautiful
    They make life miserable
    Thru presence
    Thru absence
    Thank you, sir, for sharing your verses (Report) Reply

  • Not A Dream Choice (8/23/2009 9:37:00 AM)

    hahahaha yeah I agree :) (Report) Reply

  • Aron Lelei (8/23/2009 9:13:00 AM)

    A woman of value, a woman by any name but it is true that women are the best. Nice poem. (Report) Reply

  • Ravi Sathasivam Ravi Sathasivam (8/23/2009 3:29:00 AM)

    Different type of poem. But understand your feelings.
    Well said. Great poem.
    Thanks for sharing with me (Report) Reply

  • Shashendra Amalshan (8/23/2009 12:58:00 AM)

    Yeah! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 1
    I know this feelingl.... they can cleanse our mess and make us feel so good! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
    very nicely said.....10..

    cheers
    shan (Report) Reply

  • Doha Ewiess (8/22/2009 4:15:00 AM)

    the first stanza is a nice combination between english and french languages :) ...and as usual...a very nice poem (Report) Reply

  • Rup Pokharel (8/19/2009 6:09:00 PM)

    Nice piece of art of yours i got to read.
    Thats why i always say and believe in'GOD CANNOT BE EVERYWHERE SO HE MADE MOTHERS'
    Worth reading poem..thank you for your pen and brain...
    Give us more to read...
    10++ (Report) Reply

  • Jude Ogunade (8/18/2009 9:58:00 AM)

    I agree with you! Considering the fact that a woman was made from a man! In order word, if man must be complete, he needs a woman. Hmn! Then woman becomes the better because the inadequacy of man is made adequate in woman. Nice poem and thanks for corresponding with me. (Report) Reply

  • Niken Kusuma Wardani Niken Kusuma Wardani (8/18/2009 12:23:00 AM)

    Tks, i believe so.. especially our Mom (Report) Reply

  • Kaykay Lolololololong (8/17/2009 5:29:00 PM)

    This poem is certainly different.
    I understand what you are saying..
    however women do get offended by the thought of us all being the same.
    But i do like how you write(:
    You should write more((: (Report) Reply

  • *_sakura ~daisy_* (8/16/2009 9:27:00 PM)

    hmmm i like this sweet poem
    it made me smile^^
    this was a good write^^ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 30, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, May 11, 2015


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