Wonder Poem by alibbebeth holyoake

Wonder



i look at him in the place by my side
and i think about all the nights i have cried

trying to figure out if its love that i feel
or if the thoughts in my head are not real

i want him back, well i think i do
but its only a thought not something i will do

i love him, i hate him
i want to be friends

but the love we shared
will be with me till the end.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Leinad Yancm 15 April 2008

a nice poem. been done, as the saying goes, but you did it well, average at worst. fancy reading mine. i am only 15, i wrote this poem when i was thirteen. i have just discovered a folder with all my old poems in. days of the past, is the first poems name.

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