Wondering Forwords Poem by Bharati Nayak

Wondering Forwords

Rating: 3.8


Wondering for words
Thoughts wander
They delve into the soul
To find a meaning for
The purpose
Storms and cloud brusts
May sometimes
Blow away the words
Wash away the emotions.

I allow the steam
To form a cloud
Let the cloud meander
Let it hover
As long as it wishes
Till it gathers enough water
For a surge of downpour
On the white paper
And write a new story.

Sunday, December 2, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: emotions,inspiration,life,rain,writing
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 02 December 2018

How thoughts are changed in words and how words are arranged in a poem, the poetess has nicely described it A lovely poem by Bharati Ji..

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Bharati Nayak 02 December 2018

My humble thanks and regards , Akhtar Jawadji for your nice comment.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 December 2018

An inspirational poem on emotion and nature having nice diction has been incisively delineated and amazingly shared. Thanks for sharing.10

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Bharati Nayak 03 December 2018

My humble thanks for your beautiful and encouraging comment.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 03 December 2018

ma'am your poetry and comments i have noticed r always extraordinary

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 March 2022

Let it hover As long as it wishes Till it gathers enough water For a surge of downpour....brilliant poetic expression. Loved this wonderful poem. Top score!

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Nick Mathews 01 January 2019

This poem is beautiful.

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Akhtar Jawad 30 December 2018

Emotions, inspiration, life, rain, and writing shall lead the poetess to a beautiful new story, I am sure.

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 December 2018

A surge of downpour! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Susan Williams 27 December 2018

through the clouds with you, 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ but there is no voting booth

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