Wondrous World Poem by Eindaray Kyaw
Wondrous World
Whenever I see cute birds in the sky
I wish, may I be able to skillfully fly
I think, I will be the happiest guy!
Whenever I hear busy bees' chatting
I wish, may they be clapping
I think, they are my audiences without sin!
Whenever I overheard lazy fish's snoring
I wish, may they swim by super-high engines
I think, they are micro-jeeps with wondrous fins!
Whenever I smell Mrs.Cow's fresh milk
I wish, may she help her calves from sick
I think, she plays a maternal song without lyrics!
Whenever I taste slim snake's poison
I wish, may it be the same with favourite caffeine
I think, no pal trusts me if I fill even to the brim!
Whenever I play with my sincere dog
I wish, may I magic time to stop
I think, he gives me a key to lonely lock!
Whenever I brush my kitty's complicated fur
I wish, may this be the solution for multiple wars
I think, patience and kindness can bear a peace of flower!
Whenever I watch atomic ants' trooping
I wish, may they be alert from cruel thumbing
I think, they are an army that never ceases training!
But by the way your poem is very good you gave an image of a wondrous world
caffeine snake, atomic ants are different kind of imagination! Could you write about Myanmar?
Thank you Pilo..I accept your suggestion..I will change that words from sick instead of no sick!
You have conjured a wondrous world with your wondrous words. Though I do concur with Sunny Rose and her suggestion or try I wish, she keep her calves from sick
nice and amazing.you have shown your intention in a nice written.
Wonderful poem, it has so much wonderful things to see if we able to deep see inside a simple life..great idea! _Unwritten Soul
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/25/2024 2:31:23 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Happiest girl is better i think. And may she help her calves 'so sick' not 'no sick' i think