Little Sunshine

Rookie (April 14,1989 / Kurdistan)

Words Are Upset With Me... - Poem by Little Sunshine

Today I missed you so much
I did not know what to do
Coz it was me who said goodbye
And it was me who made you cry

I could contact you
But I just did not do
coz I was not sure if it was the right thing to do

Then I came to write something
Something which would express my sorrow and pain
Then I realized I am running out of words

No words came to my mind
To express what I was feeling deep inside
I think I was so cruel to you
By saying all those unkind, heartless and mean words to you
now i know words are upset with me
They don’t need a friend like me

November 14,2008


Comments about Words Are Upset With Me... by Little Sunshine

  • Rookie Philosophy of a DewyFlower (8/29/2009 2:35:00 PM)

    I heard a sad voice told: ' I want to turn back time...' the regret is clear throughout the poem

    a good work! ! ! the pen releives pain! ! ! keep it up...10 (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Serenity Prayer (11/24/2008 3:28:00 PM)

    very sad poem. i understand the depth that its on this poem though. great job. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Dr Rajesh Kumar Vaid (11/21/2008 2:42:00 AM)

    Very sad! The poet has beautifully depicted the feeling of remorse one feels when one has done wrong in friendship, and than we do not have even guts face it as our lips are sewn. But we should say Sorry, if we have to. Hataw, also write about the other friend now! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Blue Eyes (11/16/2008 4:20:00 AM)

    it is a combination of words that came in their best place to be
    it is generally great i love the rhyme. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (11/16/2008 1:23:00 AM)

    Words don't come easy nowdays but they can do a lot of wonders.........like sayin 'yes, I do'.Simple words mean for life! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nagourta (11/15/2008 2:08:00 PM)

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    I made that line because I am so cool like the guy two comments below me! :)

    Your poem is succesfully sad, as usual. It pleases me to read them.

    It is healthy to express sadness like this, it makes for a good outlet methinks! :)

    :)
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    Take care friend! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Aijaz Asif (11/15/2008 12:45:00 PM)

    true friends do not get angry they get upset for a while after some time they forget bout what happened and returns with a smile so don't worry your friend will return soon and its an impressive write with very deep thoughts and regrets....thanks 10++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 213 Points Palas Kumar Ray (11/15/2008 7:06:00 AM)

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    I understand, if you are not basically a harsh speaking kind of persona it becomes very painful to bear the experience of becoming harsh.No wonder that you loose your words to express yourself.But dear the life's also like that.Quite often you need be harsh to protect your own individuality and preserve your dignity.
    Unfortunatly we find ourselves becoming harsh even to our friends owing to same reasons.If not we must feel free to apologise our fault soon to honour friendship.
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    Heartfelt composition indeed. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sarwar Chowdhury (11/15/2008 6:52:00 AM)

    Remembering, old saying- 'A friend in need is a friend indeed'
    Love, friendship a basic need. Friends need to understand, if not, then, about turn and left right teft march forword.....

    seeing this ya heartfelt verses, if ya friend do not turn back to u, then, just 'miss call' me, I will fly all over the world and catch ya friend alike angry Eagle and at a light speed back to u! ! ! ! ! !
    :)
    10++++and A+++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 411 Points Ency Bearis (11/14/2008 11:06:00 PM)

    every true friends listen..and understand if you are upset..and never got upset by words only..they balnce their understanding..good concept..A10

    Ency Bearis (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 8 Points Anjali Sinha (11/14/2008 9:48:00 PM)

    A slip of the tongue is not the error of the mind
    so dont worry my beautiful---he will understand you
    cauze true friends are understanding too
    ++++10 love anju (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Andrew mark Wilkinson (11/14/2008 9:26:00 PM)

    true friends don't get upset by words, true friends listen with their hearts... Andy 10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 14, 2008

Poem Edited: Thursday, July 15, 2010


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