Words Are Upset With Me... Poem by Little Sunshine

Words Are Upset With Me...

Rating: 4.7


Today I missed you so much
I did not know what to do
Coz it was me who said goodbye
And it was me who made you cry

I could contact you
But I just did not do
coz I was not sure if it was the right thing to do

Then I came to write something
Something which would express my sorrow and pain
Then I realized I am running out of words

No words came to my mind
To express what I was feeling deep inside
I think I was so cruel to you
By saying all those unkind, heartless and mean words to you
now i know words are upset with me
They don’t need a friend like me

November 14,2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Andrew mark Wilkinson 14 November 2008

true friends don't get upset by words, true friends listen with their hearts... Andy 10

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Anjali Sinha 14 November 2008

A slip of the tongue is not the error of the mind so dont worry my beautiful---he will understand you cauze true friends are understanding too ++++10 love anju

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Ency Bearis 14 November 2008

every true friends listen..and understand if you are upset..and never got upset by words only..they balnce their understanding..good concept..A10 Ency Bearis

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Sarwar Chowdhury 15 November 2008

Remembering, old saying- 'A friend in need is a friend indeed' Love, friendship a basic need. Friends need to understand, if not, then, about turn and left right teft march forword..... seeing this ya heartfelt verses, if ya friend do not turn back to u, then, just 'miss call' me, I will fly all over the world and catch ya friend alike angry Eagle and at a light speed back to u! ! ! ! ! ! :) 10++++and A+++

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Aijaz Asif 15 November 2008

true friends do not get angry they get upset for a while after some time they forget bout what happened and returns with a smile so don't worry your friend will return soon and its an impressive write with very deep thoughts and regrets....thanks 10++++

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I heard a sad voice told: ' I want to turn back time...' the regret is clear throughout the poem a good work! ! ! the pen releives pain! ! ! keep it up...10

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Serenity Prayer 24 November 2008

very sad poem. i understand the depth that its on this poem though. great job.

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Dr Rajesh Kumar Vaid 21 November 2008

Very sad! The poet has beautifully depicted the feeling of remorse one feels when one has done wrong in friendship, and than we do not have even guts face it as our lips are sewn. But we should say Sorry, if we have to. Hataw, also write about the other friend now!

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Blue Eyes 16 November 2008

it is a combination of words that came in their best place to be it is generally great i love the rhyme.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 16 November 2008

Words don't come easy nowdays but they can do a lot of wonders.........like sayin 'yes, I do'.Simple words mean for life! !

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