Marvin Brato Sr

Freshman - 640 Points (March 2,1960 / Davao City, Philippines)

$ Work $ - Poem by Marvin Brato Sr

Work is never easy
to do or accomplish

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Comments about $ Work $ by Marvin Brato Sr

  • Veteran Poet - 1,130 Points Kirby Wright (7/21/2015 6:32:00 PM)

    This is too didactic, something you should avoid as a poet. It attempts to preach to the listener instead of letting the listener discover some magic the poet reveals. You must learn to develop your poetic voice. Remember also, it is quality over quantity. I would rather write one powerful poem than a hundred weak ones. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 74 Points Rosalinda Flores Rosevoc (8/9/2013 10:54:00 PM)

    The last stanza is the best! Thank you for the inspiring poem! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 640 Points marvin brato (1/26/2012 2:41:00 AM)

    thank you for reading nd commenting! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 640 Points marvin brato (1/26/2012 2:41:00 AM)

    Thank you for reading and nice comment! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Catrina Heart (7/7/2009 6:11:00 AM)

    For work if done willingly
    And with interest that persist
    Then it will be the only solution
    To obtain a meaningful and fruitful life
    well penned in vividness...nice theme! ! ! (Report) Reply

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