World Changes Fast Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

World Changes Fast

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So do the seasons last?
Desert witnesses snow fall
Rivers spate with sudden call

Glaciers melt with hot temperature
As we disturb the natural atmosphere
Global warms up with lot many changes
Human being tries but helplessly manages

We find the changes necessary
As old customs have become weary
World has come closer
Each person is acting as poser

New fields have come up for exploration
Not education alone but improvement in relation
Language has remained no barrier
Countries have come even closer

Culture and art has crossed boundaries
Poverty and miseries too have varied
New fields have opened and people are friendly
The diseases have been controlled which were deadly

The wind blows with message of peace
Life smiles with comforts and at ease
Everybody knows the importance of freedom
No one thinks to violate or attempts seldom

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 November 2013

its very good Walrus B30 minutes ago thanks for sharing

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 November 2013

modern day Samantha39 minutes ago I love that at first you come off as if you are disturbed by the world, but at the end you portray a more humble and accepting view of the world. Great poem. Comment +1 Interesting

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 November 2013

Matthew Main41 minutes ago Different. Comment +1 Serious

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 November 2013

Corrie Diamond35 minutes ago I think of poetry as someone's feelings. It seems really serious. Really good though. Comment +1 nice message

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 November 2013

Robin Little39 minutes ago but meter made it fall short for me ~ think to add extra beat.. I think.. perhaps as experiment.. to flesh it out.. my opinion

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 November 2013

Peach There is a lot to think about in each stanza, many conclusions to be drawn.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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