Worm World....[the Truth About Worms! ; Inspired By Loke Kok Yee] Poem by Bri Edwards

Worm World....[the Truth About Worms! ; Inspired By Loke Kok Yee]

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Despite Loke Kok Yee's fine poem: Perspective From A Worm,
I have some news (of the Worm World) which....will make some squirm.
[Some PoemHunter members and/or visitors are who ….I do mean! ]
The life of Worms, in the Worm World, is not always squeaky clean.

Just the other day, according to Worm News and World Report,
a young Worm (from a prominent family) was found taking a cocaine snort!
And some Worm children go hungry.......as I type this, my newest poem;
some are reduced, for survival's sake, to chew on Elm Tree phloem! !

And in a shabby part of one Worm city, fights broke out at a grass-juice bar,
and five of the fights' participants were carried to a hospital …in a private car.
Granted, this is unusual, as witnessed by the lack of any ambulance service,
but the increase in such events (in the Worm World) is making many nervous.
[nervous Worms, I mean! ]

Ok, Worms have no worries about diseases of eyes, ears, or tongues, BUT …..
with increasing use of dandelion cigarettes, some have ‘issues' with their lungs.
Truancy, births-out-of-wedlock, and other ‘social ills' are spreading very fast,
and some Worm news commentators fear that Worm Society will NOT last! !

(October 10,2016)

Monday, October 10, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: humorous,nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
it's all there in white and black!

bri ;)

and i ain't takin' any of it back! !

thanks for the inspiration my Bro, Loke Kok Yee! !
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Quoth Theraven 23 October 2020

Bri, An enjoyable trek into a fine fantasy world that, oddly, feels familiar. One worm caused a stir within WW academia proclaiming there exist large beings, walking on two sticks humming and picking flowers, during the deadliest hours, daylight. 'they roam around unafraid of birds'. -Plato Worm

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Savita Tyagi 11 October 2016

A lot has been said with humor. I think we all are worms when it comes to climbing high bars.

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