Worse Than Most Poem by Paula Lubbe

Worse Than Most

Rating: 4.5


It seems this is not the worst of lives
But to me it comes pretty close
Bad enough to want to compromise
And a lot than the most

Maybe I'm looking at this
In the wrong way
Seeing my world ruled with an iron fist
And I don't have a say

I've heard of worse personally
I even leant my shoulder
I know they're pain and what they see
To them life seems much colder

It doesn't make me feel better
About my life or about myself
I keep my feelings in an unopened letter
Hiding my secrets on the highest shelf

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
silver phoenix 01 August 2008

i like the ending, very deep you can see tht, keep it up! If you have time please read some of my work too and rate it and/or comment it. Constructive criticism is welcome as well, offcourse. Thankyou and keep it up, Kilian

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