Would You? Poem by Scorpio Virgo

Would You?



If I rose like a cliff
overlooking the streaming river
furious below,
Would you climb on top?

If I promised sweet wine
and succ.u.lent fruit
absolute satisfaction,
Would you come too?

If a raucous ride
and sumptuous dive
were a part of the flight,
Would you scream with delight?

If waters overflowed you
and you were wet al(l over)
If passion gripped your inner most being
Would you see what I'm seeing?

Would you?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Dodd 06 February 2010

okay I would right after a cold shower. Good write.

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Allie Lusha 29 January 2010

I like this a lot and I guess you can see many things in the words depending on your mood..thanks for the comments on my poem too, look forward to reading more of your work

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