Wounded Heart Poem by erica wood

Wounded Heart

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In the beginning our relationship was great,
We use to have so much fun whenever we went on a date.
You always use to give me your love and affection,
Now when I’m with you all I feel is rejection.
What happened to all the love we use to share,
You always use to tell me how much you care.
Now all you do is put me down,
Telling me that since I won’t sleep with you, you’re fooling around.
You say you want to work things out and be with me,
But if you’re sleeping around how can that be?
You make me so upset and confused to where I don’t know what to do,
Should I pack my bags say we’re through?
I think about how you’ve been treating me,
Everything you’re putting me through is tearing me apart, can’t you see?
I feel like I’m about ready to breakdown and cry,
Now I’m doing the hardest thing I have to do, which is saying goodbye.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ratneswar Brahmachari 14 January 2007

Excellent Erica, I don't know who u r, where u from, what u do, how r u, but from thousands of kilometers away from u, sitting before my pc at Calcutta, India, I can't resist tears dropping down! after going through ur poem. It touches my heart so deeply...... Millions of thanks to u, the unknown friend! ! ! ! Thank u once more, Ratneswar Brahmachari ratneswarbrahmachari@yahoo.com

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