Wrecked Poem by Valerie Colangelo

Wrecked

Rating: 4.5


You wrecked me.
I waited for you in the dark
Where the rain drenched me
And left me shivering
For your touch, for you
To come back where you
Left me alone.
You wrecked me.
I fell from the ledge
You placed me on.
You told me you would
Only be a minute, but
That minute stretched
Into an hour, and dragged
Into months. I tripped
Trying to find your hand
In the dark and I fell.
I fell. I twisted, I choked,
I cried, and I hoped for you
To be there to catch me,
But I fell. I shattered
When I hit the bottom.
You wrecked me.

Wednesday, June 11, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: Love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Colleen Courtney 13 June 2014

I tripped trying to find your hand in the dark. Wow. Just one of many wonderful lines in this great poem! This is going to be one of those poems which stick in my mind for days to come. You write from your heart, soul and emotions which helps your poetry to come across as so beautifully honest. Saving this one to my list of favorites!

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Khairul Ahsan 12 June 2014

'Trying to find your hand In the dark and I fell. I fell. I twisted, I choked, I cried, and I hoped for you To be there to catch me, But I fell. I shattered When I hit the bottom. You wrecked me.' - Life will not stop here. Just get up and carry on, some one will be there with outstretched hands!

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Leah Ayliffe 11 June 2014

This one is so emotional. My heart sank reading it. Beautiful.

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Gajanan Mishra 11 June 2014

I hope for you, go on.. please read my poems if you so like.

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