Treasure Island

Cherret Leakey


Write Down.


Hey,
You dream of something?
Wow that is great then.
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This poem highlights one of the political strategies of an ambitions character in a play that I am working on currently. The play is centered around campus politics.

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  • Murasaki Hikari (10/25/2013 11:15:00 PM)

    I like it very much. Smart, well thought and very direct. Not very touching though. But I am a bit of dark fan, so what do I know? Don't count my opinion. U are good.: D (Report) Reply

  • Crystal Ruth (10/17/2013 3:58:00 PM)

    I like it but at first I didn't really then as I read it I liked it :) Very nice thought :) (Report) Reply

  • Cherret Leakey (10/17/2013 12:54:00 PM)

    Guys, I love your comments. keep them coming. i will look at them and conform to your advices if they truely add value to my writing.
    Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Anton Walai (10/16/2013 10:22:00 AM)

    leaky, mi like the way your poem is to the theme....it's like saying something in a brief and precise manner leaving the audience with a complete thought of your work. (Report) Reply

  • Dash Black (10/16/2013 7:02:00 AM)

    I do not want to lie about my feelings on this poem. I find it has a message you want to communicate and unless i am mistaken you have vaguely managed that, instead i feel you have mixed up whatever you wanted to say in order to create a rhythm which is not of paramount importance this type of poetry which won't be read aloud. And the title? From me Leakey it's 4.5/10 but i'll proceed to read more of your work. Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai (10/15/2013 2:13:00 AM)

    very nice. but i have the weakness. I also do dream but it drifts away before actionized. This poem is indeed a great message for a man like me who can not conceal even a single word. must vote for EXCELLENT (Report) Reply

  • Cn Lean (9/29/2013 5:47:00 AM)

    Leakey, from your poems, I can judge that you are destined for greatness. (Report) Reply

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