Write Less! Connect Deep! Random Thought 39 Poem by Savita Tyagi

Write Less! Connect Deep! Random Thought 39



Every thought of mine
Should I record it!
Every thought of yours
Should I read it!

There is something deeper
Than words that connects
A reader and a writer.

Some time I would rather
Let it all rest.
Let my existence become
A thought invisible
Yet connecting!

Like an uncut diamond
Encased in deep dark caves
Holding potentiality
Of dazzling beauty!
Waiting for diamond cutter
To fashion it all!

Saturday, June 24, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: existence,thoughts
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Muhammad Ali 08 July 2017

yes it is. sometimes, someone have this diamond. sometimes it is wasted. sometimes we reach ourselves. beautiful poem of thoughts

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Savita Tyagi 08 July 2017

Thank you so much for your comment. Yes reaching and finding your own depths is hardest.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 June 2017

It is a beautiful poem on deep thoughts having nice depiction. The last stanza is most meaningful and well related. Thanks for sharing, dear madam.

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Savita Tyagi 30 June 2017

Thank you so much Kumarmani. It is a pleasure to read your comment and read your poems as well.

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Susan Williams 27 June 2017

Some time I would rather Let it all rest. Let my existence become A thought invisible Yet connecting! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -Yes, I can see a writer turning inward at times, basically I think to restore the settings on his center. We cannot and should not spend all our time communicating, draining our wells, emptying our power reserves. Like an uncut diamond Encased in deep dark caves Holding potentiality Of dazzling beauty! Waiting for diamond cutter To fashion it all! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -Oh this is dazzling writing! This is what a writer needs to be- -periodically. But then he needs to let that light in him shine or it goes to waste in the darkness. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -A great write on a worthy topic using awesome images and targeted words. 10++++++++++++++++++++

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Savita Tyagi 27 June 2017

Thank you Susan for your thoughtful and inspiring comment. Keeping that light alive and burning is what inward going does.

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