Written With Ink Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Written With Ink

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At heaven’s door
God asked poor
How did you live life?
“Hard way, like on edge of knife”

To another man same question
He kept quiet and did not mention
“I slept merrily and happily”
Father had left plenty

Third one was gambler
I put all money in tumbler
Remained awake whole nights
Had no time but was picked to be right here

God thought for a second
Why did I prefer them to send?
If they all had no time to think
Why here it self their fate was not written with ink?

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 September 2013

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 September 2013

Dear Sir, Profound write and loved the title... With kind regards, Shigufta Uzma, Rourkela Sep 02,2013

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 September 2013

keaobaka mmmhhh, sad

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 September 2013

Very nice and enjoyable, , , sir... Padmavathi, Secunderabad Sep 02,2013

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 September 2013

Great compostion with a wonderful message, Mehta eee.... Padmavathi, Secunderabad Sep 02,2013

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 September 2013

riaz1951 Nice CASEY. nice malik Awan Superb

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