Violet Creek

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Wrong Poem by Violet Creek


Is there something wrong with me?
That would make you want to hurt me.
That would make you want to ignore me.
What did I do that was so wrong?
Did I talk to you too much.
Did I want to be with you too much.
Did I care for you too much.
Please tell me, what is wrong?
What is going on?
If you are going to break up,
with me just do it.
I'm tired of feeling like I'm,
doing something wrong every second,
I'm with you.
I'm tired of feeling like,
there's something wrong with me,
when I'm with you.

Submitted: Thursday, May 12, 2011
Edited: Saturday, August 13, 2011

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