X Absolute Freedom Poem by ONElia AVElar

interesting..............

the life after death when exists yet unknown and the freedom still shadowed, good write, thanks for sharing,

the debate goes on and on of birth, previous birth, death and re-birth, nobody knows, at least a lesser mortal like me does not: ( but the poetess knows many riddles, , absolute freedom, called emancipation of soul in another word is what we all aspire, the word 'prison' gets intensified by the prisoned 'cells' the cells symbolise life and are perhaps anxious for 'absolute freedom', a poem where the poetess is visualising the life hereafter,

true freedom...well done

freedom is when we have nothing to worry of..................

My aggregation of cells likes very much your aggregation of cells as well as how you aggregate words and liberate them into the freedom of thought. The only death is in forgetting. Could I forget you or would my heart remember...? love Dónall Dónall

thus cells posses the same awareness elements as their aggregations - yes, and ideas of life and death are relatively meaningless... poetically intriguing. Rgds, Ivan

Good imagination. Life after death is beautifully expressed.

Thoughtful composition.well done Life after death is beyond perception! 10/10

One of those thoughts that generate so much thought in those who read it...I'm not an expert in life after death...(thank goodness) ...so I just like the way it reads...Coach