X..... Peace Poem by Aufie Zophy

X..... Peace

Rating: 5.0


A pregnant coconut tree
Quadruplets about to be born
Through its gently shuffling leaves
Rays of the fast rising sun
allow a lovely sneeze

Music of an orchestra of birds
floating on sounds of breaking waves
Soft breezy air carries a smell of the sea
A feeling of close to perfect peace
engulfs my body, mind and soul

A small salamander runs by on awkward legs
The sea is blue, the sky carries fluffs of wool
In perfect harmony with the green of grass and trees
The peace goes on, a close to perfect peace
A butterfly flies by and the peace goes on

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Anderson 22 June 2012

Ah! The harmony of nature, what could be better? you laid it all out for us to enjoy. A beauty of a write. Certainly worth a 10

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Rekha Mandagere 23 June 2011

Beautiful imagery, wonderful feelings and love for nature. Well said my friend, peace always rests on the lap of nature. Nice poem.

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Walterrean Salley 18 June 2011

“…and the peace goes on.” Here, we have all breathtaking images of peace—well incorporated to render a fine portrait. Thank you.

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