Xxvii... Poem by Kali Abyss
Xxvii...
The way she described that kiss...
with you...
The way you lied to my heart,
that was true...
The way she knew exactly how you felt...
and said...
And all the words that I read...
And all the words that she said...
again, and again...
in my head...
The way she made me feel inside...
the pain, printed, carved in my heart...
...How can I forget?
The tears that felt to the ground...
and the people, just passing me by...
Don't they even know...
that my heart grew cold...
since that day?
Would they ever said...
that my heart is dead...
all because of him?
Your poem is sad... It elicits some deep feeling. Thanks for sharing. Keep writing.
So pleased to read your work so far Kali and as has been said you have great freedom of expression in your poetry so you will find more to write about in time I am sure. the appeal is sincere in this piece - and keep writing...... best wishes from Fay.
Dear Kalli Abyss. You write with your heart. The poem says that you are a sensitive heart. I give it a 9..and I wait for you to send more poems, to showe your full talent (and trhen take a 10) . Keep working on various themes. You can soon achieve a lot of things. I am sure about this. Joseph S. Josephides Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) ILP awarded
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/19/2024 3:30:51 AM # 1.0.0.1119
very nice mournful but hopeful...life continues.