Aufie Zophy

Freshman - 2,106 Points (18 October 1964)

Y/ A fable


A man was blind
‘cause he kept his eyes closed all the time
He had not seen any light
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Deep inside I believe that this little fable one day will become the truth. Let us all open up.

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  • Gold Star - 17,104 Points Valsa George (6/25/2013 5:10:00 AM)

    Open our windows and let light stream in, so that we will be able to look at life from a higher perspective and see things in greater radiance! Enjoyed this lovely write! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Ambrosia A (6/11/2013 11:04:00 PM)

    Wow, so insightful. Yes, its the self 'induced' blindness, deafness.......which disturbs our own soul and others also. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 208 Points R.j. Wynn (6/6/2013 4:31:00 PM)

    That's the bomb! great structure. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,037 Points Valerie Dohren (6/4/2013 12:29:00 PM)

    Simply put, but very true - we all need to have open minds and hearts. Good write Aufie. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 386 Points Chandra Thiagarajan (6/4/2013 6:02:00 AM)

    A very inspirational poem to see every one living in harmony! BEAUTIFUL! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 138 Points Spiritual Seeker (6/3/2013 9:12:00 AM)

    When the doors opened...the flood of goodness will flow in...beautiful write poet! A 10. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,016 Points Unwritten Soul (6/1/2013 6:44:00 AM)

    Amazing and the idea of senses and inner-senses met by metaphorical arrangement...great work Hans! _Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 267 Points David Wood (6/1/2013 6:15:00 AM)

    I agree with you. Some people need a wake up call. A lovely poem. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,688 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (6/1/2013 12:53:00 AM)

    Wow i add dis to my fav, so eloquent and inspirational, yes we have to open our mind to see God and d light. Bravo poet. (Report) Reply

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