Aufie Zophy

Gold Star - 5,298 Points (18 October 1964)

Y/. Abundance - Poem by Aufie Zophy

The silent river
feeds its abundant water
to the thirsty sea.

Who's enjoying peace
the quiet giving river
or receiving sea?

Poet's Notes about The Poem

I was in doubt whether or not to add the second stanza
What do you all think, should it be there or not?

Comments about Y/. Abundance by Aufie Zophy

  • Gold Star - 9,262 Points Geetha Jayakumar (2/24/2014 5:31:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem. Yes, I agree with Valsa's comment. There is great joy in giving peace and joy rather than receiving. Second stanza makes it interesting. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 6,718 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (2/23/2014 7:08:00 PM)

    Powerful perspective my friend! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 45,462 Points Valsa George (2/23/2014 8:25:00 AM)

    The second stanza says it all.... there is greater joy or peace in giving than in recieving! The sea is turbulent where as the river is disturbed rarely by occasional tumult! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, February 16, 2014

Poem Edited: Monday, February 17, 2014

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