Y/. Abundance Poem by Aufie Zophy

Y/. Abundance

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The silent river
feeds its abundant water
to the thirsty sea.

Who's enjoying peace
the quiet giving river
or receiving sea?

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I was in doubt whether or not to add the second stanza
What do you all think, should it be there or not?
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terry Craddock 04 January 2017

River Waters Flow To Kiss The Sea I have made through rapids still waters a long night journey upon a dark river twisting down through ravine mountains in still calm rocky rapids rush waters flowed to kiss the sea Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Y/. Abundance' by the poet Aufie Zophy. Dedicated to the poet Aufie Zophy.

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Terry Craddock 03 January 2017

'The silent river feeds its abundant water to the thirsty sea.' I have made through rapids still waters a long night journey upon a dark river twisting down through ravine mountains in still calm rocky rapids rush waters flowed to kiss the sea

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Geetha Jayakumar 24 February 2014

Beautiful poem. Yes, I agree with Valsa's comment. There is great joy in giving peace and joy rather than receiving. Second stanza makes it interesting.

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Powerful perspective my friend!

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Valsa George 23 February 2014

The second stanza says it all.... there is greater joy or peace in giving than in recieving! The sea is turbulent where as the river is disturbed rarely by occasional tumult! !

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