Aufie Zophy

Gold Star - 5,112 Points (18 October 1964)

Y... Close To My Children - Poem by Aufie Zophy

I was dreaming
I was a magnificent tree
With my children as saplings
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Comments about Y... Close To My Children by Aufie Zophy

  • Rookie - 83 Points Miroslava Odalovic (12/9/2011 5:17:00 PM)

    Very nice and in harmony, I liked this :) (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 525 Points Vipins Puthooran (12/5/2011 12:18:00 PM)

    'Tis a fantastic poem, ,
    May your childern be stood like olive buds around your table and be shined their grace for the wellness of the world! ! ! ! ! 10++++ (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,494 Points Unwritten Soul (11/27/2011 2:10:00 AM)

    I have eyes to see all your dreams and I have soul to feel what you need
    And as my eyes send images to my mind, through images i gained my thought
    and my thought got understanding as well as when it reach my soul..The understanding
    tells me all...So as if you was a tree of roses that fruiting red apples
    and i will bear saplings, bud and blossom always around you
    because the root was same, and sharing same love too
    Nice beautiful! ! ! _Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 17 Points Cristina Teodor (11/24/2011 9:18:00 AM)

    Nice metaphor you used, family should always be an entity with its unwritten laws like your tree that lives with its branches in harmony and unity..Cristina Teodor (Report) Reply

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