Y// Dear Cloud Poem by Aufie Zophy

Y// Dear Cloud

Rating: 5.0


Dear Cloud,
When will you break your silence
When can I hear the story
of your unthinkable journey
of the things you've seen,
of the winds that've blown

Dear Cloud,
When will I hear your tale,
the secret of your magic game
shape of sheep and then of fish
shape of face and then of birds
and then again completely formless

Dear Lady Cloud
How much I want to hear your music
How much I want to read your poetry
How much I want to see your dance
Please reveal to me the story,
the secret, your private art

Tuesday, November 10, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: art,beauty,cloud,secret
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
In this season, when the monsoon season wants to start but did not yet fully do so, the skies in Kelantan (the amazing special province of Malaysia where I live) are pure beauty. It got me a bit in a poetic mood...
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 10 November 2015

Dear Aufie, Coulds ask me to tell you Listen to the rain, it is a story by my tears Listen to the rain, everydrops are my fallen wish and dear Aufie Listen to the wind as it blows As it is a journey by me when wind push me to go now i tell all words from clouds to u hahahahahaha

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Hans Vr 28 November 2015

Dear Soul, There are so many types of clouds in our skies. We have the teary ones, the thundery ones, the cumulonimbi or towery ones, then we have the ones who keep changing shape and are so wonderfully silent and appear to be on an eternal journey. This poem was about that type of clouds. :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 February 2016

To praise the works of nature. Nice piece of work.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 November 2015

Well expressive poem so nicely presented. I like this poem very much. Thanks for sharing....10

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Seema Chowdhury 22 November 2015

An expressive and an engaging write, thanks for sharing

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Rahman Henry 10 November 2015

I've added this poem to MyPoemList and I like to rate it: 10++++++++++++

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Rahman Henry 10 November 2015

Well penned, wonderful poem; I really enjoyed a lot. Beautifully presented.....

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