Aufie Zophy

Gold Star - 5,126 Points (18 October 1964)

Y... Elegant Violence - Poem by Aufie Zophy

After five days of gloom
and dark monsoon,
sparks of colour in the sunrise
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Comments about Y... Elegant Violence by Aufie Zophy

  • Rookie - 308 Points Drashi Shah (10/30/2014 7:25:00 AM)

    i must say you are great beach lover..... nice poem..... (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 786 Points Patti Masterman (2/27/2012 12:24:00 PM)

    Lovely lines, I could visualize the scene just from reading this. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,494 Points Unwritten Soul (12/10/2011 6:48:00 AM)

    How can nature betrays nature, sunrise backstabbing monsoon? how about monsoon steal from sunshine? ? ....hmmm i dont know but i may say the nature having different moods...just like us, sunny smile and gloomy feelings...and the emotions carry different us sometimes action followed but what we feel, and the violence of nature expressing what happen to the world...we may keep all in ourself but nature keep all with us...why? because we in nature contentment... we need to see nature act as our behavior..maybe it's work :) because it just the rule of nature, and written by God's hand _Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,215 Points Walterrean Salley (12/7/2011 9:07:00 PM)

    This piece shows your ability to tap in and share some of nature's most guarded characteristics for our amusement. Beautifully done. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,134 Points Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (12/5/2011 12:24:00 AM)

    vioence is elegant when we are not the casuality. well said (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 165 Points Romeo Della Valle (12/4/2011 8:16:00 PM)

    An elegant short write describing one of the beauties of Mother Nature! Thank you for sharing! Keep it up, my dear friend! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from NYC... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 44 Points Malaya Roses (12/3/2011 6:38:00 PM)

    Violence of nature always in such beautiful words and style. agreed no less for nature makes us wonder.
    Poet make it more astonish with beautiful thought and beautiful write...! ! ! ! Fabulous. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 525 Points Vipins Puthooran (12/2/2011 3:44:00 PM)

    'tis an elegant poem, excellent write! /10++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 197 Points Spiritual Seeker (12/1/2011 10:15:00 AM)

    What more can I say...simply beautiful and elegant!
    Enjoy your monsoon Hans..while it last. A great 10. (Report) Reply

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